Pacing
| English | Chinese | Pinyin |
|---|---|---|
| Pacing | 节奏 | jié zòu |
A page can hold four minutes or forty years
- Pacing 节奏 is the manipulation of time in a text.
- Not the speed of events, but what the text does with the time they take.
- So pacing is always a choice, and it can be pointed at on the page.
Pacing is defined as...
A murder can be paced slowly and a walk to the shops fast.
Six contributing factors
- The CED lists them: arrangement of details, frequency of events, narrative structures, syntax, the tempo or speed at which events occur, and shifts in tense and chronology.
- Four of the six are things you can quote directly.
- So an analysis of pacing never has to be impressionistic.
Select all the pacing factors the CED names.
Arrangement of details, narrative structures and tempo complete the six.
Syntax is a pacing device
- This is the factor students never think of, and the easiest to quote.
- Long accumulating sentences slow a passage; a run of short ones speeds it.
- A single short sentence after three long ones stops the reader completely — and that stop is a pacing effect.
Which pacing factor is this?
Sort each observation by the CED's factors.
Frequency and tempo differ in that tempo is...
One event told slowly and six told quickly can cover the same hour.
Pacing is not the speed of the events — it is what the text does with the time they take. A murder can be paced slowly and a walk to the shops paced fast. Pointing at the exciting scene and calling it fast-paced describes the plot, not the writing.
The pacing factor students never think of, and the easiest to quote, is ____.
A short sentence after three long ones stops the reader completely.
Frequency and tempo are different
- Frequency of events: how many things happen per page.
- Tempo: how fast each one is allowed to unfold.
- A page with one event told slowly and a page with six told quickly can cover the same hour.
Put the pacing pass in order.
This subtopic asks how pacing is made; the next asks what it does.
A pacing pass
- Find the fastest passage and the slowest, and quote a sentence from each.
- Name which of the six factors produced the difference.
- The next subtopic asks what the pacing does to the reader — this one asks how it is made.
Two pages cover four minutes: one long sentence per paragraph, every gesture recorded, tense shifting to the present. Then one sentence covers the following year. The syntax and the shift in tense did that, and both can be quoted — the reader's experience of urgency has a mechanism.
Pacing is the manipulation of time in a text. The CED's factors are arrangement of details, frequency of events, narrative structures, syntax, tempo, and shifts in tense and chronology — most of them quotable. Frequency (how many events) and tempo (how fast each unfolds) are different things.