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Concision removes repetition while preserving meaning.
简洁删重复而不删必要事实。
“Recorded the outcomes and wrote the results down” repeats the same act here.
inspected 与 repaired 不同义，四十件检查不等于四十件修好。
Formal register uses measured claims, but it must not erase an essential limit such as “during the trial”.
正式语气也须保持数据范围。
Read this part of the original context. Retain it for the questions that follow.
阅读这部分完整原创材料，保留其中信息以回答后续问题。
Read this part of the original context. Retain it for the questions that follow.
阅读这部分完整原创材料，保留其中信息以回答后续问题。
Read this part of the original context. Retain it for the questions that follow.
阅读这部分完整原创材料，保留其中信息以回答后续问题。
Read this part of the original context. Retain it for the questions that follow.
阅读这部分完整原创材料，保留其中信息以回答后续问题。
Read this part of the original context. Retain it for the questions that follow.
阅读这部分完整原创材料，保留其中信息以回答后续问题。
Read this part of the original context. Retain it for the questions that follow.
阅读这部分完整原创材料，保留其中信息以回答后续问题。
Read this part of the original context. Retain it for the questions that follow.
阅读这部分完整原创材料，保留其中信息以回答后续问题。
Read this part of the original context. Retain it for the questions that follow.
阅读这部分完整原创材料，保留其中信息以回答后续问题。
Read this part of the original context. Retain it for the questions that follow.
阅读这部分完整原创材料，保留其中信息以回答后续问题。
Read this part of the original context. Retain it for the questions that follow.
阅读这部分完整原创材料，保留其中信息以回答后续问题。
Pause here and attempt the task before revealing the reasoning.
请先暂停独立作答，再查看推理。
Use the full context on the preceding pages.
结合前面各页的完整材料。
“The volunteers recorded the outcomes.”
“志愿者记录了结果。”
Deleting the whole sentence would remove the act of recording; concision should remove duplicated meaning, not the information itself.
删掉整句话会去掉“记录”这个动作；简洁应当删去重复的意思，而不是删掉信息本身。
Pause here and attempt the task before revealing the reasoning.
请先暂停独立作答，再查看推理。
Use the full context on the preceding pages.
结合前面各页的完整材料。
“The arrival windows improved scheduling, but one visitor still waited outside.”
“到达时段改善了安排，但仍有一位来访者在外面等候。”
The original's “totally amazing” is informal and unsupported, while “every problem forever” contradicts the remaining wait and sign changes.
原文的“totally amazing”很口语，也没有依据，而“every problem forever”与仍然存在的等待和标识修改相矛盾。
The revised benefit is limited to the reported arrangement.
修改后的好处只限于所报告的安排。
Pause here and attempt the task before revealing the reasoning.
请先暂停独立作答，再查看推理。
Use the full context on the preceding pages.
结合前面各页的完整材料。
No.
不行。
Only eighteen worked after a permitted minor adjustment; twelve needed parts and ten were referred elsewhere.
只有十八件在允许的小调整后能用；十二件需要零件，十件被转到别处。
Inspected describes all forty, while repaired would falsely assign one successful outcome to all of them.
“检查过”可以描述全部四十件，而“修好了”会错误地把一个成功的结果加到所有物品上。
Precision controls word choice.
用词要靠准确来控制。
Return to the task and explain why the method fits.
回到题目解释方法为何适用。
Original practice does not predict an official score. Complete required live or recorded evidence separately.
原创练习不预测官方分数；现场或录音证据需另行完成。
Pause and test yourself. Cover the worked answer, rebuild the answer to the last example in your own words, and name one condition that would change it before you check.
暂停一下，自我检测：遮住示范答案，用自己的话重做最后一个例子的答案，并在核对之前说出一个会改变结论的条件。