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Eighty characters about a trip
- A writing task asks you to describe a trip you remember in at least eighty characters.
- Eighty characters is about five or six short sentences. A plan makes it connected instead of a list.
Plan four parts
- When and where (last year去年summer夏天，I / me我and / with和family member家人to go去(completed / change)了Hangzhou subprovincial city…杭州), what happened (two or three events in order), one concrete detail (Xihu or West lake (place…西湖suffix of a noun of locality边(modifier / structural particle)的lotus荷花), why you remember it.
- Time words link the events: 第一天, then / after然后, afterwards后来, final最后.
last year去年summer夏天，I我and和my family家人went to去了Hangzhou杭州。
Which part of the plan?
Sort sentences into the four parts of a trip account.
Which word best links two events in time order?
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然后 means “and then” and links events in time order. 但是 shows contrast, 因为 a reason and 如果 a condition.
Put the parts of the account in order.
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When/where → events → why you remember it.
Make it concrete
- Replace general words with details: degree / adjective linker很to be playful好玩 → we / us我们at / in在Xihu or West lake (place…西湖(bound form) up上坐船，to see看见(completed / change)了很多lotus荷花。
- Add a feeling and a reason: I / me我to feel / think觉得degree / adjective linker很to relax放松，because因为that那to be / is是we / us我们whole family全家the first time第一次in the same place一起to travel旅行。
last year去年summer夏天，I / me我and / with和family member家人to go去(completed / change)了Hangzhou subprovincial city…杭州。第一天，we / us我们at / in在Xihu or West lake (place…西湖(bound form) up上坐船，to see看见(completed / change)了很多lotus荷花。then / after然后we / us我们to go去variant of 吃吃(completed / change)了famous有名(modifier / structural particle)的Hangzhou subprovincial city…杭州vegetable菜。afterwards后来down下(completed / change)了一场heavy rain大雨，we / us我们to have no other option but…只好at / in在teahouse茶馆li, ancient measure of…里to drink tea喝茶。这次to travel旅行I / me我all along一直to remember记得，because因为that那to be / is是we / us我们whole family全家the first time第一次in the same place一起to travel旅行。 (about 90 characters)
Which sentence is most concrete?
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It gives a specific action and detail.
我觉得很放松，____ 那是我们全家第一次一起旅行。(because)
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Give a reason with 因为.
Check before you finish
- Count roughly: each line of 15–20 characters × 5 lines ≈ 80–100.
- Check verbs of completed events take (completed / change)了 where needed, and time words are in order.
Five sentences of about 16 characters each would reach the eighty-character minimum.
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True. 5 sentences × 16 characters = 80 characters, exactly the minimum. Writing slightly more gives a safe margin.
Common mistakes
- A list with no links: I / me我to go去(completed / change)了Hangzhou subprovincial city…杭州。I / me我坐船。I / me我to have a meal吃饭。 — add then / after然后 / afterwards后来 and details.
- Stopping before the minimum length; short answers lose marks.
Recap
- Plan: when/where → events in order → one concrete detail → why you remember it.
- Link with time words, use (completed / change)了 for completed events, and reach at least eighty characters.