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저장된 위치는 이 브라우저에 유지됩니다. 계속하기는 수업을 완료하거나 질문에 답하는 것이 아닙니다.
Repair the missing job before polishing its adjectives
- Original data: cycling’s share rises from 20% to 35%, while cars fall from 50% to 40%. A draft copies the four numbers but gives no main picture. Add “Cycling gained share while cars declined; cars still had the larger share” before searching for rarer synonyms.
- A second draft says “The figures was rising”. That needs subject–verb agreement repair. The two problems involve different criteria, and neither sentence alone establishes a full Writing band. An adjective cannot volunteer as the missing overview.
What is Task 2’s weighting multiplier relative to Task 1?
난이도 2/5 · 140 코인 + 오늘 첫 완료 시 소액 보너스
Task 2 contributes twice as much as Task 1. This weight does not create a separate compulsory 40-minute timer.
Task achievement and Task response ask whether you answered
- Academic Task 1 Task achievement concerns selection, an overview and accurate relevant reporting. In the cycling case, report the share change; do not add an unsupported explanation about road construction.
- Task 2 Task response concerns the actual question, a clear developed position and relevant support. A qualified position can be clear: support a campus option while opposing compulsory residence for carers. Develop the qualification rather than switching to another question.
A Task 1 draft lists numbers but never states the main pattern. Which revision best addresses that problem?
난이도 1/5 · 100 코인 + 오늘 첫 완료 시 소액 보너스
Select and summarise the main picture, then support it with accurate details. A single checklist item does not establish the full response’s band.
Coherence and cohesion connect the message
- Arrange ideas so the reader can follow the argument or report. Paragraphs can group a main idea with its development. Linking words, pronouns and repeated noun phrases should make their relationships clear; no required linker quota exists.
- “The timetable offers evening sessions. This option could help carers attend” has a clear reference. “Moreover, it is cheaper” introduces an unsupported cost claim if no cost information was supplied. Changing the linker alone cannot supply the missing evidence.
모든 문장을 Firstly, Moreover, Furthermore로 시작하면 논리성 및 연결성(Coherence and cohesion) 점수가 상승합니다.
난이도 1/5 · 100 코인 + 오늘 첫 완료 시 소액 보너스
Starting every sentence with a signpost can make links mechanical. Use expressions that fit the relationship, along with clear reference and logical idea order.
“Evening sessions provide another option. This option could help carers.” What does This option refer to?
난이도 1/5 · 100 코인 + 오늘 첫 완료 시 소액 보너스
The noun phrase refers back to the attendance option, making the connection clear without claiming a guaranteed effect.
Vocabulary and grammar preserve precise meaning
- Lexical resource includes range and accurate, appropriate use, including collocation. “Bus fares fell” is precise when that is the intended claim. A more unusual word can also work when its meaning and register fit.
- Grammatical range and accuracy concern suitable structures, accuracy and punctuation. Correct “the figures was rising” to “the figures were rising”. Error patterns and their effects on communication matter in the full response; there is no local points tariff for this one error.
Which wording is clearest for a straightforward claim that bus fares fell?
난이도 1/5 · 100 코인 + 오늘 첫 완료 시 소액 보너스
Bus fares fell states the direction precisely. Rare vocabulary is useful only when it fits the meaning; a word is not forbidden merely because it is uncommon.
각 기준이 무엇을 측정하는지 매칭하십시오.
난이도 2/5 · 140 코인 + 오늘 첫 완료 시 소액 보너스
네 가지 기준은 과제 내에서 모두 동일한 가중치를 가지며, 각 과제의 بند로 평균화됩니다.
The minimum and the full assessment are different
- Academic Task 1 requires at least 150 words; Task 2 at least 250, in connected text. Notes can organise a plan, but are not the submitted response. A short answer may show too little task development or language; do not invent a fixed numerical deduction.
- Four criteria have equal weight within each task; Task 2 contributes twice as much to Writing as Task 1. Our short checks diagnose taught distinctions. They do not evaluate all the evidence an examiner needs or predict a band.
What is the minimum number of words stated for Academic Writing Task 2? Type the number.
난이도 1/5 · 100 코인 + 오늘 첫 완료 시 소액 보너스
Task 2 asks for at least 250 words. Meet the minimum while developing relevant connected prose; do not assume a fixed automatic deduction.
Change the draft and reassess its remaining needs
- Adding an overview repairs the missing main picture, but the draft may still misreport a value or contain agreement errors. Review each claim and its organisation after revision; one successful edit does not certify the whole answer.
- Criteria and format checked on 2 October 2026: official IELTS Writing guide and Writing preparation resources. The snippets are original teaching cases.
- Locate the task, organisation, vocabulary or grammar need, then review the whole response after the repair.
Match the distinctions in this worked case.
난이도 2/5 · 140 코인 + 오늘 첫 완료 시 소액 보너스
Use the criteria to locate needs, not to assign a score from one sentence. A full response can show strengths and weaknesses in several areas together.
A revised draft now has an accurate overview but still says “the figures was rising”. Which edit addresses the remaining error?
난이도 1/5 · 100 코인 + 오늘 첫 완료 시 소액 보너스
Figures is plural, so were repairs this agreement error. Adding an overview did not automatically fix other language needs or establish a band.
Repairing the agreement in one sentence establishes the whole response’s IELTS band.
난이도 1/5 · 100 코인 + 오늘 첫 완료 시 소액 보너스
One repair checks one problem. A full response supplies evidence across all four criteria.