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ライティングの採点基準 — 4つの指標

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Repair the missing job before polishing its adjectives

  • Original data: cycling’s share rises from 20% to 35%, while cars fall from 50% to 40%. A draft copies the four numbers but gives no main picture. Add “Cycling gained share while cars declined; cars still had the larger share” before searching for rarer synonyms.
  • A second draft says “The figures was rising”. That needs subject–verb agreement repair. The two problems involve different criteria, and neither sentence alone establishes a full Writing band. An adjective cannot volunteer as the missing overview.
Different draft problems need different kinds of revision

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